Peer Review for Sarah Moskowitz

In this blog post I will make a content suggestion on Sarah's standard college essay. 

In this peer review, I left a comment on Sarah's production report. I suggested that she break up her second paragraph into two separate paragraphs and to maybe include a couple of examples of why project one was so horrendous. I think that I helped Sarah just strengthen her overall argument and just finalize her work before turning in a final copy on Friday. In the Student's Guide I incorporated information from the section Use of Evidence.

I really enjoyed Sarah's humor that she included throughout her entire essay. It kept me engaged and made the tone of the essay light and breezy.