In this blog post I will be revising Sienna's standard college essay on the new barbie doll.
Review
I made a content recommendation to Sienna's essay. I thought that since this is the final production week it only made sense to offer her a content recommendation. I thought that I helped Sienna just finalize her project in order to make it fully finished.
Her essay was really strong and well-delvoped I just offered her some advice on adding some more quotes to further strengthen her argument. From the Student's Guide, I incorporated the information in the Use of Evidence sections. In that category it refers to quotations specifically, therefore, I recommended that Sienna add some.
I really admired Sienna's citations. I am going to be doing an essay for project four so it was really helpful to see her implement that genre before I attempt to.
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