In this blog post I am going to review Eren's video essay on Qatar's FIFA bid.
Peer Review Feedback:
I choose to review Eren's outline. Specifically, I looked into the evidence/resources (sources) that were incorporated in the outline. I think that I helped Eren create a more detailed content outline so that when he goes to produce his project his information will be more clear and organized.
Based on the Student's Guide, I helped Eren with his use of evidence and sources. I suggested that in terms of evidence that he include outside research or experience, while in terms of sources I suggested that he integrate some quotes.
I really admired the amount of specific details that Eren had for his evidence. He really went into detail on exactly what he was going to be discussing.
Based on the Student's Guide, I helped Eren with his use of evidence and sources. I suggested that in terms of evidence that he include outside research or experience, while in terms of sources I suggested that he integrate some quotes.
I really admired the amount of specific details that Eren had for his evidence. He really went into detail on exactly what he was going to be discussing.
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